The diagram below shows the process by which beer is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the production of making beer. Overall, the process includes several steps, starting with malted barley milled and ending with beer products delivered to consumption.
First of all, malted barley is poured into a milling machine, which will then be mashed with water. After that, the mixture is moved into a lautering stage in which the spent grain is used for animal feed while the remaining liquid continues the next process. Before being transferred into a whirlpooling machine, the liquid is boiled with sugar and hops. In order to move to the last few stages, the combination needs to be cooled down.
After cooling, the fluid is added with yeast into a container so as to create fermentation. At this step, more yeast and CO2 are manufactured. Next, the beer is converted into a maturing machine, which prepares the product to be ready for the filtering step. Finally, beer is put into package whom the truck delivers for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...id is added with yeast into a container so as to create fermentation. At this step, more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99378881988 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56892187359 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7598840047 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976730541982 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468167977133 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592245763186 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767086317943 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410591443195 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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