the diagram below show the entire procedure of flavored bottled drinks. summarize the stages and information by selecting and reporting features.
The diagram demonstrates the total procedure of drink making , overall the entire trail initially started by bringing the raw water to the place and after traversing 5 stages the packages of bottled drinks would be delivered to markets.
During first stage , which is water cleaning , the raw water would pass trough a filler in order to add water softener and some chemicals to it and then after being pumped to a tank which is heated electrically it goes trough a cooling pipe to enter a tank which carbon dioxide is also included in there , this part of trail was stage 2; the heating evaporation and carbonation. By the end of stage 2 carbonated water would be streamed and flowed to a mixing thank passing a ling big pipe, here is the initial point of third stage , which is called mixing, more over, three small containers including coloring, syrup and flavored are attached to this mixing tank and would be added to the water to create different types of drinks, the fourth stage is filtering and filling the bottles also cans and prepare the packages, which finally at stage 5 would be exited by the trucks from the factory and distributed in markets.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ates the total procedure of drink making , overall the entire trail initially st...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure of drink making , overall the entire trail initially started by bringing the...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng , overall the entire trail initially started by bringing the raw water to the...
^^
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...livered to markets. During first stage , which is water cleaning , the raw water...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng first stage , which is water cleaning , the raw water would pass trough a fille...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and some chemicals to it and then after being pumped to a tank which is heated e...
^^
Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...carbon dioxide is also included in there , this part of trail was stage 2; the hea...
^^
Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...med and flowed to a mixing thank passing a ling big pipe, here is the initial poi...
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Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: LING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
...and flowed to a mixing thank passing a ling big pipe, here is the initial point of ...
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Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...here is the initial point of third stage , which is called mixing, more over, thr...
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Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age , which is called mixing, more over, three small containers including colorin...
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Line 2, column 666, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lavored are attached to this mixing tank and would be added to the water to creat...
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Line 2, column 840, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and prepare the packages, which finally at stage 5 would be exited by the trucks...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73267326733 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48251840219 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 22.4926829268 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.889722465 43.030603864 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.666666667 112.824112599 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.3333333333 22.9334400587 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 5.23603664747 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141310223303 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117448928298 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794170778034 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151955685029 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726342707197 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 13.2329268293 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 61.2550243902 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 10.3012195122 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.9970731707 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ates the total procedure of drink making , overall the entire trail initially st...
^^
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure of drink making , overall the entire trail initially started by bringing the...
^^
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng , overall the entire trail initially started by bringing the raw water to the...
^^
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...livered to markets. During first stage , which is water cleaning , the raw water...
^^
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng first stage , which is water cleaning , the raw water would pass trough a fille...
^^
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and some chemicals to it and then after being pumped to a tank which is heated e...
^^
Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...carbon dioxide is also included in there , this part of trail was stage 2; the hea...
^^
Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...med and flowed to a mixing thank passing a ling big pipe, here is the initial poi...
^^
Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: LING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
...and flowed to a mixing thank passing a ling big pipe, here is the initial point of ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...here is the initial point of third stage , which is called mixing, more over, thr...
^^
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age , which is called mixing, more over, three small containers including colorin...
^^
Line 2, column 666, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lavored are attached to this mixing tank and would be added to the water to creat...
^^
Line 2, column 840, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and prepare the packages, which finally at stage 5 would be exited by the trucks...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73267326733 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48251840219 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 22.4926829268 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.889722465 43.030603864 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.666666667 112.824112599 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.3333333333 22.9334400587 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 5.23603664747 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141310223303 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117448928298 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794170778034 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151955685029 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726342707197 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 13.2329268293 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 61.2550243902 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 10.3012195122 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.9970731707 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.