Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Getting affordable medical services throughout their region is a concern for the majority of the countries around the globe. While there is one school of thought which advocates for free health services for all, another argues that it would limit the availability of the latest diagnostics at affordable price. This essay would however discuss how there is a need to strike a balance while devising healthcare-related schemes.
In many developing nations, the majority of the population cannot even afford simple treatments for common ailments. In this case, free healthcare for sicknesses involving simple procedures and treatments makes more sense. This is mainly because of the lack of resources for income and unhealthy living conditions. For example, in my city, there was a big slum near my building where people were staying in deplorable conditions and hence were victims of many easily avoidable diseases. Therefore, it becomes very logical for the authority to provide free healthcare facilities in these regions.
On the other hand, people in developed countries or big cities usually need assistance with complex treatments which are very costly. So, if free medical services are provided in these regions but the latest treatments are excluded from them then it might become counterproductive. For instance, since I have started to live in a big city with better infrastructure and hygienic conditions, I have rarely visited a doctor for common illnesses. And in cases where I visited, it was very much affordable. Similarly, a friend of mine, unfortunately, had some issues with his kidney and needed a complex medical procedure to be done which incurred a huge sum of money. But as he got some concession with medical policy, he could afford it.
In conclusion, even though many people believe in equal and free treatment for all, policies should be formulated based on the condition of people living in a particular territory. I strongly believe that the government should not only provide free of charge medical services but also make the novel medicaments affordable for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27462686567 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93406263506 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0151995807 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194541493533 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655050755302 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475712100215 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125794479084 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310103017273 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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