There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
• Describe the problems
• Explain how these problems are affecting the public
• Suggest what changes could be made.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your attention a problem that our local dwellers are facing due to substandard transport system. long delays and over-crowded buses are the main cause of these troubles.
Let me explain fuhrer, every day's unexpected delays by buses making people late to their works and causing their negative impression in offices. Moreover,because of over-loaded buses many people do not get the the chance to get in and have to wait for another bus, which is then again cause them extra long waiting owing to delayed buses. I believe that is is a big issue as not of aforementioned reasons but because of bad weather in winters. These long waits outside in the freezing temperature makes people sick.
I think it would be better if you hire a professional driver who knows the value of time. Additionally, extra no of buses must be included to cover those delays. Thanks for your consideration.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to bring to you...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter to bring to your attention a problem that our local dwellers are facing due t...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Long
...ng due to substandard transport system. long delays and over-crowded buses are the m...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...negative impression in offices. Moreover,because of over-loaded buses many people do not...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ver-loaded buses many people do not get the the chance to get in and have to wait for a...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ver-loaded buses many people do not get the the chance to get in and have to wait for a...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... owing to delayed buses. I believe that is is a big issue as not of aforementioned re...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... the value of time. Additionally, extra no of buses must be included to cover tho...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...value of time. Additionally, extra no of buses must be included to cover those de...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r your consideration. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, John Sm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90643274854 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79049719475 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719298245614 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1474937382 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124583157671 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04452460778 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576696813032 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688123352997 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748806157166 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.