Is freedom pf speech necessary in free society To what extend do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t is most essential or not. In the essay,I am going to examine this question from ...
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...hen they feel free and safe in society. to be more clear,there are many kinds of r...
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...ee and safe in society. to be more clear,there are many kinds of rights in my country,...
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...o be more clear,there are many kinds of rights in my country,but people speak freely i...
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...e are many kinds of rights in my country,but people speak freely is crucial right. M...
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...their own problems. On the other hand,it is also possible to make opposing case....
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...ews with local individuals and community,then many mankind can leak these kind of inf...
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...th local individuals and community,then many mankind can leak these kind of information. but...
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...nd community,then many mankind can leak these kind of information. but people are allowed ...
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...ind can leak these kind of information. but people are allowed to speak free in law...
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...re allowed to speak free in laws such as,health,voting,and education.As a result, When ...
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...speak free in laws such as,health,voting,and education.As a result, When people have...
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...aws such as,health,voting,and education.As a result, When people have no right to ...
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...n create riots and protest. To sum up,As we have seen,there are no easy answers...
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...reate riots and protest. To sum up,As we have seen,there are no easy answers t...
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...d protest. To sum up,As we have seen,there are no easy answers to this question on...
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...easy answers to this question on balance,However,I tend to beleive that lawmakers should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8897338403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72057948215 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0650345648 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516435481461 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172976184662 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266687866259 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313657235055 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238211993679 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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