Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet.Do you agree or disagree?
Many people in the world currently choose not to eat meat in their daily meals.While I accept that this addiction can help to their healthy.I believe not everybody should become vegetarian .The following paragraphs discuss whether benefits of being vegetarian or negative way of this and reach a reasonable conclusion.
In my views,there are several benefits of being vegetarian.Firstly ,if people could eat vegetables,their immunitet of increasing.As we know to eat a lot of vegetables useful healthy.In addition to,it have different nutriets.It has become less necessary for people to eat meat.Such as potatoes,it is favourite meal majority of peoples,because of the large amount of colories.Secondly,fruits and vegetables contain vitaming that highly benefical for people.For examples,it has been proven that eating an apple every day can help humans improve their healthy and avoid illness.
Nevertheless,I believe this tendency is not suitable for everyone.Firstly,it is not advisable for children to become vegetarian.They are in progress at growing up they need to an ample range of food,including meat which contain important nutrients to improve their physical healthy.If children only eat vegetables,they might become less healthy than they should be. In addition ,sportsemens are the people who should not be vegetarian .Because they eat meat for physical healthy.
In conclusion,while I agree that becoming vegetarian can help people have a healthy diet,I do not think it is an opinion that everybody should take
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68122270742 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63050476177 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.099488259 49.4020404114 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.2 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6 7.06120827912 348% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321441758151 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203659150742 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768062827097 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209726746058 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894789533436 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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