In the modern era, social networking sites such as Instagram, Facebook and Snapchat have become an essential part of our lives. However, a lot of people think that these social networking sites have detrimental effect on society and people. Do you agree or disagree?
Social networking has become an essential part of the routine for everyone. However, social media such as you tube, facebook, snapchat and instagram have detrimental effect on people especially adolescents.
Firstly, people share their happy stories of travelling, cooking, success and parties on social media. Thus, sometime people get depressed by comparing the lives of others with their own lives. According to the latest research increased use of social media is associated with rapid rise in the suicide rate and mental health issues. Moreover, social networking sites such as dating apps are being misused by criminals for abducting, rape, murders and kidnapping purposes. For instance, anyone can have a sneak peek into the personal life of a girl who is proactive on intagram and posts pictures of her daily routine on social media platforms.
On the contrary, others argue that social media has brought the world closer. People can even attend professional meetings via social networking sites such as whatsapp. However, I believe that there are more disadvantages than advantages of using social media. Mob lynching, protests and strikes are often the result of spreading fake news via social media. Moreover, the issue of body image also arises as nowadays people want to look like their favorite celebrities whom they follow on instgram. School children especially teenagers have been reported to remain addicted to their mobile phones instead of communicating personally to the person sitting next to them. This not only increases cognitive health issues but also causes vision problems and insomnia.
In conclusion, I believe that social media is a disadvantage for adolescents as they develop social media addiction. They are too young to understand that in the long run they are wasting their precious time. They could have utilized this time in useful activities such as sports, dance, swimming or playing and remained physically and mentally healthy.
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- Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41100323625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64860980535 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9131383802 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3529411765 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298120382199 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994957665133 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980725897185 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224492007904 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148498683759 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.