When we can see films on phones that what the need of going to the cinemas is Others say that to fully enjoy the films it should be seen in cinemas Give both views and give your opinion

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When we can see films on phones that what the need of going to the cinemas is? Others say that to fully enjoy the films it should be seen in cinemas. Give both views and give your opinion.

Hollywood movies like cartoons still remain the best memories of every person even in adulthood. Cinema creates a long lasting effect on the viewers. For instance, we still remember the famous dialogues of our favorite action hero years after watching the movie. In the following paragraphs I will discuss whether one should watch movies in cinemas which are expensive and more time consuming or whether phones or tablets are better for viewing movies.

Beyond any qualms, big screen movie experience remains engrossed in our mind due to the light, sound and group experience while watching any movie. For instance, 3D movies such as Jurassic park create a real life like experience while we watch it in a cinema hall. We enter a virtual Jurassic park where dinosaurs are roaming freely and their screaming makes us frightened and causes an adrenaline rush. Such an experience is impossible while we watch the same movie on our mobile phone. In Addendum, even the normal non 3D movies also create a better viewing experience when we watch our favorite characters on such a large screen and experience the protagonist’s emotions along with other viewers who are there to enjoy the film and give us company. Therefore, in spite of availability of free movie downloads people still prefer to buy movie tickets to watch movies in theaters.

On the contrary, some people believe that watching movies on mobile phones and tablets is better as they can watch it according to their own time convenience and without wasting money. For instance, people now like to spend their commute time while travelling from office to home by watching movies in cabs or metros. This prevents them from getting bored on the way and also keeps them busy and entertained. They not only save their time but also save money.

In conclusion, I believe that watching movies, especially movies with special effects in theaters is a totally magical experience and can never be compared with watching such movies on phones. However, for people with busy schedules and financial constraints watching movies on phones are a better option

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... on mobile phones and tablets is better as they can watch it according to their ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05730659026 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54011744134 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2861342794 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107298942157 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387543172002 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450106008008 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650671865456 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366878342316 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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