It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. (1) However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. (2)
Society is solely dependent on the upcoming generation to boost a country’s economy as well as improve lifestyles by and large. There are different schools of thoughts regarding the future of scholars today. Some people opine that students should take-up working after completion of their schooling, while others believe that they should complete their tertiary education and then obtain suitable employment. This essay will discuss both views objectively and arrive at a logical conclusion.
Firstly, some are of the opinion that teenagers should be personally motivated to work after completion of senior high school education, enabling them to understand the value of money and the demands that society put forth. One of the main reasons for students to look for employment post schooling is a lack of financial stability resulting from the absence of inherent wealth, or perhaps a pressing need to support the family. Furthermore, a lack of confidence to study higher could also be a valid reason, if the student has painful memories from childhood which hampered his growth in all aspects. For example, there are many drop-outs from school nowadays and this could primarily be attributed to any one of the above reasons. Therefore, this decision could help students become street - smart at a very young stage of their lives.
Secondly, it is argued that students should continue their education at the university before being employed. The main objective would be to help students achieve white collar jobs, enhance their professional and soft skills, and live a quality life. For example, considering the educational background of political leaders, business tycoons and leading entrepreneurs who have graduated from top notch business schools, have contributed immensely to the economy of their respective countries in a tangible manner. Hence, education is a backbone in the development of self and society, and will help individuals reach greater heights while enjoying a rewarding and satisfying life.
To sum up, in my opinion higher education is absolutely necessary in moulding the society and will play an instrumental role in a students successful future.
- Some people opine that a new language should be invented for people from different countries to use for international communication How do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The importance of academic subjects as compared to extracurricular activities is increasing every day Some people suggest that sports classes should be sacrificed in High School so students can concentrate on Academic subjects Do you agree or disagree 39
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Other say that to be fully enjoyed Films need to be seen in a cinema 73
- It s generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent 1 However it s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist 2 89
- some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to bee seen in cinema discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...being employed. The main objective would be to help students achieve white colla...
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...mployed. The main objective would be to help students achieve white collar jobs,...
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Suggestion: top-notch
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, by and large, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81969346186 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2007506397 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.142857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0714285714 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741992714961 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254664079014 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275759212446 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388555987715 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260886243046 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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