Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that.
Do you agree with this opinion?
It is often believed that health is a private matter for an individual, so they should be responsible for paying for their health care. Although I agree with the statement to a certain extent because health problems are mainly because of their sedentary lifestyle, I still think that government is also responsible for health care because all people cannot afford it.
Firstly, on the one hand, health problems are mainly caused by irresponsible habits. That is to say that, increase in the amount of junk food intake, alcohol, and smoking habits are responsible for many issues such as obesity, asthma, and diabetes. Even though the majority of the people know about the problem it can create, still they display thoughtless behaviour and as a result, increase in government burden. To illustrate, a survey conducted by an organization, British Healthcare, and Welfare Society, on 2000 candidates who used to smoke, revealed that slightly more than 75% of people know that it is bad for health, but they still indulge themselves in smoking. By the result of this experiment, it is safe to say that people should be responsible for their deeds.
On the other hand, a free medical system should be a basic human right. Nevertheless to mention that many ailments are passing on to generations through genes and which they are not directly responsible for such as cancer, salivary gland deceases, and HIV. Apart from that, one big medical bill is enough to do sink all savings for most of the families in any given country, due to costly treatments. For instance, a very common cancer, genetic of mutation which is pass through genes have simple chemotherapy session take around 2000$ whereas people have average income is around 2100$ monthly. Therefore, government responsibility cannot be denied in the medical help.
To conclude, though I agree with the scenario because many people are responsible for their poor health, I think authority have equal responsibility for bearing the cost of treatment for its public because many people could not afford the treatment and not everyone is directly responsible for their bad health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, whereas, apart from, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11714285714 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72916373526 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3283928455 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.769230769 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3227672037 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123786384142 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982884129604 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213623973723 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704268466668 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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