Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
By and large, most of the people tell lie in different situations of their lives. From my vantage point, telling truth plays a crucial role in every relationship. The significance of trust in stability of any relationship is inevitable. I will elaborate on my viewpoint through three major reasons in following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, the longevity of friendship is totally depend on the trust between friends, and it is so fragile. A person who is told a lie by a friend can excusably feel betrayed since telling a lie inadvertently send a signal that that one does not trust their friends. Thanks to this fact, when one side tells lie, trust is lost and there are honest any more due this, the friendship is gone, too. My own experience provides an illuminating insight in to this fact. I had a friend for about six years and we were so good for each other. However, once she told me a lie about a matter I became very disappointed and I never trust her again.
The other reason deserving some words here is that when people say a lie, they adapt to say more and more lie to cover the first one so gradually they get accustomed to saying lies. Furthermore, people who tell lies most of the time are nervous, and worried about revealing the truth and breaking apart their relations. Most of the time, hiding the reality by saying nothing is more intelligent. I would like to mention a result of a research that was conducted last year in my university. Due to the results most of the students which tell their friends lie have psychological problems and as a consequence they lose their friends readily.
In conclusion, contemplating all above mentioned paragraphs, telling truth is very fundamental in relationships since it keeps away people from breaking trust between them. Besides, telling truth makes people happy and have healthier friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... the longevity of friendship is totally depend on the trust between friends, and it is...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...t. I would like to mention a result of a research that was conducted last year in my univ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80122324159 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79180942932 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7235790047 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3529411765 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176968739465 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644885868821 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056441041585 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13605948658 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701154092209 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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