You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Tom and Jane
How are you? I am your new neighbour.
We are happy to live here. Because my neighbour is very important to me.
I am planning a big party at the evening strat 17:00 02.02.2021. Because I bought a new house. My friends and my relatives are coming to the party. I think they have called a musical group. If the music playing after it has very noise. When there is a big and high noise every neighbour will be in an uncomfortable situation. That we will be uncomfortable with the situation(????). That party's program will start at 17:00 from 22:00 continue until. The party will include 60 people. I think when my friends come to the party in the car we will need the car park. Can I use your car park place, because I need the parking place.
I am inviting your family to my party .If you come to my party I’d be happy. Thank you for everything and apologize for the noise.
Sincerely Ahmet
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Dear Tom and Jane How are you? I am your new neighbour. ...
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... How are you? I am your new neighbour. We are happy to live here. Because my ne...
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...ighbour. We are happy to live here. Because my neighbour is very important to me. ...
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...lanning a big party at the evening strat 17:00 02.02.2021. Because I bought a ne...
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... a big party at the evening strat 17:00 02.02.2021. Because I bought a new house...
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...t the evening strat 17:00 02.02.2021. Because I bought a new house. My friends and my...
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...group. If the music playing after it has very noise. When there is a big and high...
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...If the music playing after it has very noise. When there is a big and high noise eve...
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...e in an uncomfortable situation. That we will be uncomfortable with the situation...
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... I am inviting your family to my party .If you come to my party I’d be happy. Than...
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...ank you for everything and apologize for the noise. Sincerely Ahmet
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...thing and apologize for the noise. Sincerely Ahmet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40350877193 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48617118474 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2250455905 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.2941176471 76.5299724578 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0588235294 16.8248392259 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240582514306 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722371916927 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968538639869 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207418192153 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128621321595 0.0580467560999 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.76 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.