Some people think that economic development is the only way to end poverty while others believe that it is causing damage to the environment so should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The economic growth brings benefits to human life, which make some people believe that it is the best way to tackle poverty problem. while other people argue that the development in economic sector may harm the environment. In this essay, I will seek to explain the reasonable opinion of both perspective and compare with my opinion.
Admittedly, the economic growth can improve the quality of life of the society in any country. It is the most effective instrument for reducing hunger and any others poverty problems. The economic development can generate virtuous circles of prosperity and opportunity. It will bring many job opportunity to the unemployed, so they can earn money to fulfill their daily needs. For instance, the development of rural area near tourist spot will provide job opportunity to the people around the area such as being a tour guide or opening a restaurant. Thus, it may lead them to the enhance of their quality of life and free them from poverty.
Nevertheless, economic growth also bring detrimental effect to the environment. There are many countries who have caused damage to the earth because they only concentrate to the economic development. For instance, the development of tourist area also make some construction change. Some construction such as reclamation may harm the sea ecosystem and cause enormous damage on earth. This kind of infrastructural development has made in order to accelerate the economic growth but also will destroy natural habitat and imbalance the nature ecosystem in the world.
All in all, from my point of view, i believe that economic improvement can solve the hunger and poverty problem of a country. Therefore, i personally believe future growth will also need to be environmentally sustainable. Thus, it necessary to prevent the side effect while improving the economy of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91794448199 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8439303553 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8823529412 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249357345442 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076141024525 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492816141304 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155476440696 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646443198858 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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