Some people believe that young employees are the most valuable for the company. However, others argue that older employees have more experience and knowledge. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the given statement?
Working sectors have undergone substantial changes since the technology has given its presence in this era of modernization. Presently, a massive number of people opine that young blood contributes remarkably in the progress of business sectors. Thus, corporate world is progressing by leaps and bounds. By contrast, others believe that veteran grey generation is more lucrative for the bright future and success of companies. Here, I would like to accord with the former statement.
There are multifarious points to support my point of view. First and foremost, unlike old employees, youngsters are well educated, technically more advanced and more articulate and hence they can be more productive for the business firms. To illustrate, young people nowadays are engaged with prominent universities where they achieve a great deal of knowledge and experience regarding theoretical and practical skills.They can learn to 'operate latest' machines and technical equipments whereas grey- haired employees have orthodox thinking and they often resist the use of new technology in working sectors. Adding to it, younger generation is more creative, adaptive and agile as compre to senior employees. Thence, the role of young talent is terrific in order to uplift the status of business firms.
Further, emphasizing on my point of view, young people are called the backbone of a company. Young employees have strategies, tips, tricks and techniques to deal with heavy work load and welcome to new innovative ideas and experiments whereas late adulthood workers resist such kinds of changes owing to their conventional attitude. As a result, young people are believed to be real hero in boosting the economy of companies. What is more, unlike old employees, modern generation is not only physically and mentally sound but also has much greater work efficiency. To justify, young workers are healthy and they can work round the clock. They are passionate in showing their maximum potential at workplace in order to get promotions, awards and incentives. Consequently, such traits make them matchless and their important at workplace is ultimate.
To recapitulate, employees are the backbone of the business firms. Undeniably, well matured employees are supposed to be worthwhile for the holistic development of companies. However, I still believe that a firm can progress dramatically under the presence of modern employees. Thus, corporate world believes in hiring young employees these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'operate the latest'.
Suggestion: operate the latest
... and practical skills.They can learn to operate latest machines and technical equipments where...
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Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...eal with heavy work load and welcome to new innovative ideas and experiments whereas late adul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, while, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51697127937 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90385677327 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57180156658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1431319298 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.619047619 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236642547425 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614723043252 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437846575243 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14610520019 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122421585491 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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