keeping aminal in captivity such as zoos has now being popular, even now that they have evolved into animal parks or similar facilities. What do you think the adventages and disadvantages from this ?
zoos have become a popular trend now days in fact that many people add animal in captivity, more then those they have transformed into animal parks or identical facilities. There are several advantages and disadvantages from this topical issue,which i will elaborate more below.
Regarding the benefit,first, we must admit that in most cases they offer a secure and peaceful setting for animal, for example in high quality wildlife parks or reserves. Furthermore, in many cases, the animals would suffer from loss of habitat or poaching in the wild and in captivity there are at least safe and able to breed successfully. Finally, zoos and animal parks are part of an integrated system of protecting of protecting animals, involving habitat protection, breeding programs and disease control. this all helps to safeguard endangered species and thus preserve the global ecosystem for the future benefit of all life forms.
Conversely, we should not ignore various drawbacks that this issue may bring about. Firstly, the unnatural way in which animals live in such places. For example, captive animals do not need to hunt or raise offspring , and this ,means that they are not living as natural intended. In additions, animals probably suffer mentally when kept in captivity, even if their surroundings are spacious and similar to the natural habitat. Symptoms of mental issues range from repetitive behavior to eating disorders, and these are often seen captivity animals. Lastly, it might be said that zoos add little to animal conservation, which is better served by preserving their habitat.
In conclusion, the positive that a valuable services to society and the animal world lead to help to protect many species. Meanwhile, living unnatural way and suffer mentally could be a substantial drawback that should not be forgotten as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in many cases, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28231292517 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74894981384 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9524519196 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9285714286 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267138794802 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778758996298 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574719605753 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149976372102 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797522169251 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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