You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Hi, dear John!
Fingers crossed, your project is over and you are having a great vacation.
I want to tell you that I moved to my new flat. You know I bought a new apartment in Moscow last year and I’ve gotten the key this month. This place for living is very comfortable. There are combined kitchen-living room and 2 bedrooms, one for me and one for my child. It means, that now my daughter and I have separated rooms and I have the big kitchen for cooking. In other words, everyone has a place for himself now.
In addition my apartment is located near the center of the city, but far away from traffic. As for my neighbors, they are really gentle and friendly people. I wish I had lived here earlier, but I didn’t have enough money.
Now, guess what, I want to invite you to visit me this weekend. I would really appreciate if you let me know the time that is convenient for you. I haven’t seen you for ages. It would be nice to catch up with you.
Looking forward to hearing you,
yours Kate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er and you are having a great vacation. I want to tell you that I moved to my ne...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w apartment in Moscow last year and I’ve gotten the key this month. This place f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oscow last year and I’ve gotten the key this month. This place for living is ver...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., everyone has a place for himself now. In addition my apartment is located near...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...yone has a place for himself now. In addition my apartment is located near the center...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arlier, but I didn’t have enough money. Now, guess what, I want to invite you t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... but I didn’t have enough money. Now, guess what, I want to invite you to visi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, as for, in addition, you know, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33157894737 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34562715686 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9611778676 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.8666666667 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20813520242 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074249725228 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056869045933 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117247176067 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443883672984 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.