Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:-
- Suggest a topic that you think would be popular.
- Say why it would be of interest
- Explain why it is more relevant/ interesting than other topics.
Dear sir,
I am writing to convey my concern regarding a latest readable column in your newspaper that usually publish on a regular basis. It was mentioned in the newspaper that the publisher has instigated newspaper readers about their ideas. I am an avid reader of your esteemed newspaper. I would like to recommend to add a health and fitness topic. Nowadays, more than half of the population is suffering with health hassles.
There are number of reasons such as sedentary lifestyle, fast food and workload. Because of these they often overlook their health. Apparently, everyone wants to get rid from these problems. These days not only the retired people but also youngsters are suffering with these problems. Furthermore, people hire gym trainers or mandators to keep fit themselves. In ruler areas and people who lives in suburbs could not take advantage of gym. Perhaps article written by experts about health would be useful to people and imitate their attraction.
Yours faithfully,
rani
- Nowadays an increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries What problems does this cause what can be done to solve this 78
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 56
- Many children these days have their own mobile phones What are the advantages and disadvantages of it 56
- Some feel that the effect of advertising are positive for individuals and business while others think they are negative Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 61
- Your local newspaper would like to have a new regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an email to the newspaper Write a letter to the newspaper In your letter Suggest a topic tha 53
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... writing to convey my concern regarding a latest readable column in your newspape...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend adding'.
Suggestion: recommend adding
...our esteemed newspaper. I would like to recommend to add a health and fitness topic. Nowadays, m...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tary lifestyle, fast food and workload. Because of these they often overlook their heal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1963190184 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65617958723 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730061349693 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8669668505 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1538461538 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178340995589 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059156259539 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739123636837 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146082911766 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130588036724 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.