Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, people used to make only necessary purchases to meet their needs. However, nowadays since the term of advertisement was introduced and developed people have been driven to buy products they saw on adverts while there was no need for them. I personally think that, adverts are the driving force behind the increasing sales in many items at least more than a need factor.
Firstly, it was not until the world started seing many advances in technology and social media that gave a huge boom for every avenue including the sales. Social media websites have been made an interactive platform where a manefucturer can easily offer their services and products to the public. For example, instagran ,one of the most popular social media websites, is a great source for catching attention of potential customers and inclining them to buy items which they do not really need. As a result of these changes our attitude towords regularly advertised products has been influential thus it is giving a considerable rise for some categories of sales.
Also, there is an increasing number of advertising campaigns that are conducting some researchs on consumer behaviour so that they could yield a product and make it appealing to customers. In majority of cases, those advertising campaigns have been succeeding in getting people interested into buying their products which are not always necessary.
To sum up, advertisements are playing a huge role in growing sales figures of some goods. I do think that, in 21st century people tend to purchase popular items impulsively rather than based on their real needs whis is the main factor exploding the sales of some products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, really, so, thus, while, at least, for example, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68481928039 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8615905721 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148977350614 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552180810649 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043047440747 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954024829747 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281332600222 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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