Full time university student spend most of the time studying they should be doing other activity to what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, all the students learning other skills at a younger age. The students who are doing full-time university study, they should be doing other activities. This essay will explain the importance of other activities, how that will use in their future, it is described in the following paragraphs.
To starts with, there are plenty of benefits from other tasks in college. First and foremost, students can learn a various skill such as communication from the debate and hosting. Communication skill is one of the most valuable skills for everyone. If any peoples have it, they can get a job rapidly. For example, big multinational companies take employers from tasting communication because it is a mandatory requirement.
Furthermore, extracurricular activities provide knowledge of the real-world and experience. If students do an internship in a similar period of study. That helps in terms of experience, which will count as a plus point for them in work experience manner. they also get information about how to work in Their field and how to control emotion in the workplace. In addition, if students cannot find jobs they can start their own business with their internship knowledge.
To conclude, students doing academic study with extra activities, that push students to gain more information about their field and society also. They develop their communication skill and gain experience. That will create an opportunity of jobs as well as business, so doing other activities are reasonable for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ledge of the real-world and experience. If students do an internship in a similar ...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...int for them in work experience manner. they also get information about how to work ...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...formation about their field and society also. They develop their communication skill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29752066116 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01099912031 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2176252544 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245136794102 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825995135472 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124066553941 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157524912821 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10053645093 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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