Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time
Some individuals are of the opinion that leisure activites of children should be responsibled for their parents. Nonetheless, others suggest that children should be the ones who determine what to do. Both views possess a degree of accuracy, howerver, I suppose that it is better to let children be free to decide the activities they would do in their unwind time
On the one hand, it would be appropriate for parents to pick up their children’s activities since they profoundly undrestand what is optimal for thei kids’ development. In details, parents can help children get rid of some unfortunate events which may occur during their play time. Consequently, children could play in an assured environment, allowing them to enjoy their free time without any obstacles. For example, parents can decide the toys with no sharp angle for their children, preventing them from getting hurt
On the other hand, children have their own preference, therfore, it is better to let them decide what activities they would do in their free time. Specifically, an introverted child may not be interested in some outdoor activities, they may prefer the intellectual one. Moreover, children can earn the experience through receiving negative consequence from the inappropriate decision. Consequently, it is more suitable for children to decide what they should do in their free time
To conclude, although this is a controversial topic, I believe that parents should allow kids to freely determine those activities since it could help them be able play the most suitable activities due to their preference, as well as getting experince through negative consiquence they receive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, for example, i suppose, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95273313482 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.591821251 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.111111111 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508299521278 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224376886502 0.084324248473 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104992653539 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342914908792 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133344146065 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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