Write a letter to a friend about the Public event in your town, who you think would be interested to take part in it.
There is a public event coming up in your town.
In your letter.
●Describe the event.
●say why you think he/she would be interested.
●suggest an arrangement to meet with him/her at the event.
Hello buddy! Hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits, It’s been so long that we haven’t met each other. I know about your dearly interest in dance. So here is a golden opportunity to showcase your talent in the same.
Pal, I wanted to let you know that there’s a Dance Fest to be organized next month from 5th April to 7th April at Oxford Square City which is just next to my apartment. This is going to be a three days long event which would be full of fun and frolic where one can enjoy participating in competitions and live performances of famous performers. Apart from the dance competition, there will be singing as well as acting concerts also.
Mate, as far as dance is concerned, it will be hosted by John Snow and would be judged by one of your favorite dancers Kate Prince. Not only the performances will be judged by such a renowned artist but also the top three dancers will get a chance to learn choreography from her. I must say this could be your life-changing experience. You may not get such a wonderful opportunity again.
Moreover, you can meet me directly on the inauguration day at my apartment and from there, either I or one of the volunteers will escort you to the event site. I will keep an extra pass handy for you to avoid the hassle of being in the queue. Also, don’t worry about the participation process, I would be more than happy to get you registered myself as I am part of the organizing committee.
Waiting to hear back from you about your participation.
Thanks
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l be singing as well as acting concerts also. Mate, as far as dance is concerned, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50714285714 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63987283244 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.171867271 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27453357123 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923225734385 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527037929007 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153778482512 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203143768423 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.