Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary

Grammar and spelling errors:
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in materialistic world, vacational is a pl...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...l is a platform of financial income for most of people. Some people argue that the high salary...
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... than the degree of satisfaction in job.In my perspective, I partly advocate with ...
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...with the given statement. To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genu...
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... given statement. To begin with,having an significant income in job is an genuine...
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...,having an significant income in job is an genuine ambition to most of people.With...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...income in job is an genuine ambition to most of people.With the big salary , people can afford...
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...s an genuine ambition to most of people.With the big salary , people can afford many...
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...on to most of people.With the big salary , people can afford many demand in life n...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun demand seems to be countable; consider using: 'many demands'.
Suggestion: many demands
...With the big salary , people can afford many demand in life namely as leisure,education, cl...
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Suggestion: , education
...rd many demand in life namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a b...
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...fe namely as leisure,education, clothing,.... For instance, having a big budget mo...
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... ... To peple who have commercial vision , they can use their income for invest re...
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...the most potetial market at the present.It is clear to see that having big income ...
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...lize the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise...
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Suggestion: Hence
...ze the degree of abundant in your life .Hence, owning a big salary job can raise your...
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...job can raise your position in society. one of the particular evidence is Jack Ma, ...
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...e othe famous billionaires in the world.He had been a normal citizen in the past u...
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...cceed as inspiration. In the other hand ,salary is not component contributing to ...
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...ting to your achievement in job. In fact , attitude is the fundemental decide your...
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...he fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mo...
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... fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mone...
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... fundemental decide your future in job .In detail, people who merely work for mone...
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...ir job because the lack of stimulation. In psychology, worker can face with some m...
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...worker can face with some mental disease as for working in out of their persional...
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...nspiration in work is a fundemental part , having a big income for the betterment ...
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Suggestion: .
... the betterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely o...
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...etterment life is worth sacrifying . In addition finding satisfactory rely on your frst ...
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Suggestion: Hence
...actory rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the ...
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...rely on your frst acheive in job.Hence, i would argue that high salary is the pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18731117825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99186027212 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6131221242 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123042594983 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506590503304 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044976756473 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857103271586 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263170794176 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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