The leader or director of organization are often older people but some people say that younger people can also be a leader do you agree or disagree
In the present era, Age does matter because older people have experience and decision-making ability. According to the current status of leadership, most of the organization prefer to have more of the older people with a great experience background and decision-makers other than the younger citizens in the country. These main factors can differentiate the purpose of having more older citizens than the younger ones as explained below.
Old leaders/directors would be the best fit for a position in an organization because of the great strong experience in that particular field. Citizens with a longer experience would find it easier because they have more knowledge about it as compared to the newcomers who have to learn from the start. For example, one of the most successful company in the world, the TATA group have senior citizens as directors and most of them have a very good experience background.
Furthermore, the leaders must have the accuracy of making the right decision. This quality would be seen in older because they have gone through very many situations in life therefore they can handle a situation without any consultation from others. For example, in countries like India, the prime minister is a senior citizen and there are approximately more than ten senior prime ministers all over the world.
In summary, older citizens have much more experience and decision-making abilities which make them the best candidates for the leader and director that would help the organization grow rapidly in easier. Overall, older aged citizens would be a perfect match other than the younger generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...can differentiate the purpose of having more older citizens than the younger ones as expla...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the younger ones as explained below. Old leaders/directors would be the best ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, therefore, for example, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23846153846 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94747911546 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8254191915 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169075868101 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762897644498 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497119621614 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112011238787 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470759116591 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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