Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays.
In your letter, you should:
-expalin your travel plans
-describe the interesting places you plan to visit
-ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.
Dear Anne,
I’m just writing to let you know about my future plan to visit your home country Australia.
As you know, I’ve got two weeks off from from and I’ve decided to plan a holiday. I’ve made online reservation for air tickets as well as accommodation. It’s a family holiday and I just want to spend some quality time with my loved ones. I’ve already booked a boutique hotel, which is not far from your house in Sydney.
Honey, as you are aware, I’m highly amazed by the culture and magnanimous people of this country, I would be delighted to experience the local community and traditions. Moreover, my wife is a big fan of museums so visiting them would be our first preference.
My Love, It would be great, if you could suggest me some popular tourist attractions in your country, which can add more remembrance to my upcoming trip. As you’re living there since childhood, I’ll will not find any better guide than you.
Hoping to see you soon. Keep in touch.
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
... As you know, I’ve got two weeks off from from and I’ve decided to plan a holiday. I’v...
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Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: YOULL_WILL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I will'?
Suggestion: I will
...As you’re living there since childhood, I’ll will not find any better guide than you. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4577673625 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725714285714 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0105171503 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262332510656 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866973459808 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664250331236 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144278888544 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759714675506 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.