The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The internet has grown to be one of the most effective means for trip planning. however, it is often people argue that there is no point in traveling overseas when you can see and gain knowledge about other nations and countries, while I agree internet has many benefits for many people, I would argue about internet effect on people and foreign countries.
Nowadays, the Internet provides people a wide range of information about all countries across the world. With the aid of the internet, people can research about the country they like to pay a visit and reach to any information they are looking for such as watching videos or reading people comments on Google which is a mega search engine, Youtube which is an online video sharing and Twitch which is the streaming platform. Therefore people do not need to travel across the world in order to gain knowledge about their culture and traditions.
To counter the above argument, first, some of these platforms are not free and if anyone looking for an accurate answer they have to pay for a subscription however there is still many helpful sites that could help people to experience what they have not through the internet although these sites are editable and are based on personal information. Second by exposing them to new places, a new society, or even culture people can reform their view of the world and open their minds while using the internet has no place to gain traveling experience
Many people think the current generation is responsible to take care of the environment and save the environment for the next generation, which I agree with although it is a great burden that needs to be saved and take care of.
Over the past few decades, many environmental problems have appeared as a result of human activity and rise in population, such as deforestation and pollution which had a direct effect on climate change and it damages earth’s ecosystem such as arctic loses more ice than it gains due to the global climate change. By ignoring these problems so many lives will be in danger such as humans and animals or any living species.
However, the current generation needs to step up and protect the environment in order to pass on the legacy of the earth to the future generations and maintain balance on the earth by example stopping deforestation which has a great impact on animals habitat or the rate of cancer increases due to the pollution and it can be stopped, otherwise, not only humans will be doomed but also entire living species on earth will struggle to survive
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...most effective means for trip planning. however, it is often people argue that there is...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...Twitch which is the streaming platform. Therefore people do not need to travel across the...
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Line 11, column 244, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...forestation which has a great impact on animals habitat or the rate of cancer increases...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81405895692 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54323528634 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.649952884 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.3 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.1 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203696823941 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842945050324 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553712518771 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091637515254 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621351425454 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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