A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-give details of the course you took at the university
-explain why you recommend the university
-give some advice about how to apply
Dear Ravi,
How are you doing buddy? I saw your letter last weekend and was happy to know that you are willing to apply for the same university course, which I undertook for my graduation.
First of all, let me explain the structure of this particular course of Mechanical Engineering at Cape Breton University, so that you are aware of the curriculum before-hand. The program is 70 percent theorey and 30 percent practicals spread over 8 semesters of six months each. The week starts with 3 days of theory sessions followed by workshop practicals on Thursday and Friday.
From my personal experience with this course at the university, I can surely say that you will acquire a lot of skills during the program which will help you in your career. Moreover, you will find that the teachers are experienced in their respective fields and they never fail to deliver the best to their students. You can always approach them without any hesitation for any subject related queries
For admission queries, you can write to admissions@cbu.com or fill their online application form with all your credentials. They will respond within 24 hours with the answer to all your question whether about the course fee or campus facilities. I am excited to see you graduating from this university and joining the alumni club.
Wish you good luck for your admission, Take care.
Bhupender
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will help you in your career. Moreover, you will find that the teachers are expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00432900433 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7576810924 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3105920791 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343385109727 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116714695149 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867672781288 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194857327163 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725521867966 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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