In schools and universities girl trying to chill add subject wild boys to sand subject what is the reason? Should the trend be changed?
In this present era, all students went to schools and universities, but there is one difference between the boys and girls field. Boys select science subjects, while girls choose arts subjects. This essay will enshrine reasons behind this situation, and also explain possible solutions for it, which describe in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, plenty of things which creates this phenomenon. First and foremost, the mindset of the culture, they think girls become a housewife in the future, therefore girls have not required to learn hard subjects like science. Furthermore, boys have the responsibility for earning in the future, and sciences provide a high salary as compared to another field. For example, in India, all high paid jobs belong to science streams such as doctors, engineers, and many more. These are the main reason for those inequalities in selecting subjects.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of steps, which change these scenarios. Firstly, if the government gives equal right to both genders, then girls will motivate to learn other difficult subjects, and be a nurse, a doctor, etc in the future. secondly, if the authority provides salary by employees knowledge, then students choose subjects by their interest, and girls take science and boys take arts by their curiosity. For instance, the USA government provide money by people knowledge, therefore people of the USA choose both the subject by their interest.
To conclude, this situation is happened because of societies mindset and high salaries, which will be solved by providing equality to both genders and paid by employees knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ng equality to both genders and paid by employees knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30651340996 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66687034057 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.723235761 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152770278229 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524373739255 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365960802743 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860747758415 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365175089595 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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