The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006 Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below

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The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006 Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below

The bar chart depicts the proportion of various cinema in Australian and English cinema market in 2001, while the line graph illustrates the amount of admission in cinema between 1976 and 2006 in both countries.

Overall, American movies had dominated UK and Australian cinema market during the period and number of getting admission on cinema was higher in British throughout the period.

In term of chart A, the larger number of US films had been released in UK in 2001, which was recorded nearly 75%, while this ratio was less by 7% in Australia. However, only 20% of local movies were screened in UK theatre and Australian movies was just by halved. In contrast, demand of Australian movie was only 5% in British, while less than 2% people watch local movie in Australia. The demand of other movies was significantly higher in Australia as compare to UK, which was accounted just below 20% and under 5% respectively.

Turning to chart B, in 1975 around 25 million Australian got admission in cinema and with some fluctuation it reached at its highest point in 2001 by just below 100 million. But, during 5 years it dropped to 80 million in 2005. However, UK exceed Australian admission ratio throughout the timeline with more erratic pattern. It started with 100 million in 1975, which is more than highest of Australian admission. Although, it plummeted below 60 million in 1985 and start increasing gradually with some fluctuation and end up with just below 160 million in 2005.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93650793651 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61590720813 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0063857124 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277100080911 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108824089286 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843949298065 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192275860998 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725280613023 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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