Many large supermarkets are being built today while the number of small shops is decreasing.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, big companies are working to extend in the market and achieve a high profit. Large supermarkets are built over the countries including a big variety of shops in it, where the customer enter and find everything they want. This new era is affecting small retail shops and causing a conflict in the market scale.
On one hand, huge supermarkets have many advantages to satisfy the customer. Where the buyer have a large choice of many brands that suits his purchasing value. Secondly, in such supermarkets the person can find all their needs without moving from one shop to another. Moreover, big stores works on obtaining their own brands in good quality and lower prices, to increase their profit. For example, Coles one of the biggest supermarkets in Australia, works on attracting small shops to open inside their stores, or buy them to be under their name.
On the other hand, small shops in the upcoming years most of them will be closed. The main reason, little capital stores are facing difficulties to stay in the market, where it is getting bigger and require high budgets to rival such big supermarkets. Therefore, the number of clients is decreasing, especially for clothes shops where everything could be found at the central market lately. For example, people used to purchase their socks from any local shop, know they can find at the supermarkets with big number of choices.
As a conclusion, the number of large supermarkets will continue to increase, but this will impact negatively on small shops. That is why we can find shops are closing permanently, others are moving inside the markets. This way is causing a defect in the finical situation for many sectors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...any advantages to satisfy the customer. Where the buyer have a large choice of many b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95789473684 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59688000883 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0629468445 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261656106317 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887540954622 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563713871068 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163724899346 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231479151916 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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