Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary world, People have adapted a tendency to depend on un ethical sources for finance leading to a surge in delinquency rate, some believe most crime are a result of circumstances like poverty and many different social problems and the rest think it is just the cruel nature of indeviduals resulting in multifarious crimes. Here I would like to account my views on both ideas and give my notion.
To commence with, Mental illness can be the primary reason for acts against the law especially for the juveniles exposed to trauma or social delima, who grow up to become a law-abiding citizen. To add on, In a situation of recession and unemployment, folks get frustrated due to no income and high living cost, when these problems are not solved for a long period it can bulge in further complications like robbery, fraud and extortion. further more, there are myriad communal complications which hike the crime rates as judging an individuals frame of mind is impractical, for example, An introvert pupil studying in a co-educational institution has more chances to rape or perform a molestation act as his mindset is precarious.
on the flip side, folks always have a choice to face any situation no matter how horrible th situation gets, an individual can always choose the ethical solution but the choice made will be way less comodious than the unethical choice. hard work can dodge any possible problem in a persons life , be it poverty or humiliation. Although the multitude face immense problems due to poverty and myriad socials troubles,I opine every problem can be solved by hard work and optimistic behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88314795818 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5884374504 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.25 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191068392643 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792803266763 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868656205923 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142490254505 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127421155369 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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