In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study: academic or vocational. What are the advantages for students and society of putting students into two streams at the age of fifteen?
In this fast-growing competitive world, non other than education contributes a crucial role in each individual's life.
Additionally, schooling system of all the countries are not similar, it varies country to country. Training systems of numerous countries provide both types of knowledge such as academic and practical in the higher secondary standards. After a close scrutiny in this matter, it can be observed that there are numerous pros of academic and vocational trainings at teenage, which are found to be very beneficial to students as well as society. This view shall be elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, academic subjects like science, social study and maths are very useful in later life of students if they opt for the academic stream in higher standards. As a consequence, it offers a very fabulous development of students in core subjects. Moreover, at the end of an academic year, students will give the presentations about what they acquired in the academic training. To cite an example, when i studied in 10th standard, i was given the time to research after the completion of my teaching. In this manner, i demonstrated all the subjects with confidence. By that time, i have been elected as a academic teacher of my school.
Secondly, along with academic subjects, vocational subjects has a vast impact on students' future. Through practical training, student can gain hands-on experience. Consequently, they will have a better prospects in their future career. Since they have acquired all the skills, they do not need to study other subjects. Hence, most of the industries prefer these students. For instance, one of my friends, Meet, had elected professional training in welding subject in his higher studies. In this manner, he got a huge experience of welding trainings, which are very useful in his current job profile as an assistant welding technician.
To put it in a Nutshell, practical and academic teaching have its own diverse merits. As both the streams create many opportunities to students for their fertile future, Both are equally promising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22352941176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92625627356 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.56873734 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241791913422 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639412880446 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583808088858 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120610625685 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07498554623 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.