Causes of unemployment nowadays
Unemployment is a big problem for individuals, communities and society. A question is raised what causes this problem. In my opinion, overpopulation, lack of appropriate qualifications and global pandemics have been responsible for joblessness.
In the first place, the increase of population is one of the main reasons for unemployment. Obviously, when overpopulation occurs, the number of jobs are fewer than the number of applicants. Therefore, many people are difficult to find a job. According to statistics from The National Statistics Bureau, in Vietnam in 2018, the population increased which led the unemployment rate reached up to 25 percent compared to in 2015.
The second cause is the lack of qualification for employers. In fact, many graduates are unemployed because they lack of not only appropriate qualifications but also necessary skills for their job responsibility such as communication skills and group working skills. A servey conducted by The Social Journal published that 90 percent of university leavers could not seek for a job due to their lack of practical skills.
Finally, global pandemics also result in joblessness. A typical example is The Covid-19 pandemic, which we are facing now. It is clearly that during this pandemic most companies had to close to prevent from the spread of the pandemic. At that time, workers had to stay at home instead of going to work. It means that they became unemployed people.
In conclusion, there are some main reasons for unemployment including the increased population, the lack of qualification for applicant and global pandemics. To tackle this problem some practical and effective solutions should be taken as soon as possible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39925373134 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2099681671 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.443096144 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12974512628 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447541406579 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577135778584 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731411317706 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334441810828 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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