Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
some experts think that to learn foreign language in primary school is better than secondary school. In this essay discuss the advantages as well disadvantages of this view.
To embark upon, firstly, to learn foreign language in primary school is better than secondary school because when students studying in primary school they learn second language very easily. Secondly, in childhood students graps power is good due to this they can easily graps the things into the mind as well as their prounciation is also good througout the days. It is helpful in the future for job opportunities to work in a foreign nations. Last but not the least, in childhood students donot feel shy to speak second language in front of others as owing to these mistakes they learn foreign language very easily.
However, forcing children to learn too many language has its drawbacks. We have to taken into considerations that secondary education nowadays requires too many subjects likewise science, mathematics, physics as well as accounts and so on. Adding another one subject may create unneccessary pressure on the pupils. Moreover, some students are unable to handle the workload of school work as we saw they get under dipression. Furthermore, in secondary school students don not easily learn foreign language because they do not much familier with second language.
In conclusion, to learn second language in primary school is best way than secondary school. Due to this, children learn foreign language without any stress in free environment according to their intrest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15537848606 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58411915031 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 251.0 20.2975951904 1237% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1294.0 106.682146367 1213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 251.0 20.7667163134 1209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 127.0 7.06120827912 1799% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379903900326 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.379903900326 0.084324248473 451% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283774113578 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114896867892 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 128.4 13.0946893788 981% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -183.29 50.2224549098 -365% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 101.2 11.3001002004 896% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.11 8.58950901804 222% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.4 10.1190380762 1012% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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