Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Our world comprises of wealthy developed and poor underdeveloped or developing nations. The countries with strong economic backgrounds often provide financial assistance to nations with weak economic backgrounds. Whether such countries should be bestowed with monetary help or another form of support is always been a controversial topic. In my opinion, such economies should be supported by endowing them assistance to meet their basic needs instead of monetary support, and in this essay, I will cite reasons for the same.
A country gets poorer due to its unfavorable climatic condition as well as lack of amenities to fulfill their fundamental needs. In other words, multiple countries are facing water and drought situations for years resulting in a huge setback to their economy. They struggle for fulfilling the basic needs of their citizens leading to a large number of deaths. For example, many countries in South Africa are facing water and food issues that hamper the country's progress leading to making them poorer. Thus, the monetary support would not resolve such grave problems of the under-developed destitute nation.
However, the developed nations can aid poor countries by providing necessities like food as well as assisting them to resolve their problem using modern sophisticated technologies. For example, there are many types of machinery developed to carry pipelines across countries which can aid to resolve at least drinking water issues. Furthermore, scientists have invented hybrid seeds and plants which grow on very less water. Such inventions of developed countries can help resolve fundamental issues of food and water thus fostering the country's economy. Henceforth, developed countries could assist the poor nations with their infrastructure and new inventions.
To conclude, nations with weak economic backgrounds require amenities and technologies to uplift them rather than financial assistance. Hence, an illustrious developed country should consider helping destitute nations through modern scientific inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, at least, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65359477124 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83243421516 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 306.0 20.2975951904 1508% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1730.0 106.682146367 1622% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 306.0 20.7667163134 1474% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 7.06120827912 1600% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27759390429 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27759390429 0.084324248473 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179450238527 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318729040536 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 158.2 13.0946893788 1208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -247.57 50.2224549098 -493% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 123.8 11.3001002004 1096% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.97 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.89 8.58950901804 266% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.4 10.1190380762 1229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 124.0 10.7795591182 1150% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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