You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to refer to your letter regarding charges levied on me for the withdrawn of the amount from my savings bank account. I have a saving account with account number123456789012 in your bank. I received a letter yesterday in which it was written that I have been charged $70 for the overdrawn amount of $240, however, that information was not true.
I have been your regular customer for almost 5 years. I deposit every month small part of my savings after spending the amount on my requirements from my salary. I have always maintained a minimum balance in my account and withdrew the amount keeping the minimum threshold requirement in my mind. I have never withdrawn more than my savings limit. Therefore, I believe that the information mentioned in the letter must be incorrect.
I urge you to please check your records, it may be a clerical error. I have attached my bank statement with this letter explaining my case. I requested you to rectify this as soon as possible so that I do not have to bear the charges levied on me for wrong information.
Hoping for prompt action by you on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
KIRAN.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...40 however that information was not true I have been your regular customer for al...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entioned in the letter must be incorrect I urge you to please check your records ...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arges levied on me for wrong information Hoping for prompt action by you on this ...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for prompt action by you on this matter Yours faithfully KIRAN
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by you on this matter Yours faithfully KIRAN
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61764705882 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73170753685 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 204.0 16.3608247423 1247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 942.0 76.5299724578 1231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 204.0 16.8248392259 1212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 42.0 4.34317383033 967% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37969146265 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.37969146265 0.0766984524023 495% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231104809066 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885527262885 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 102.3 8.37731958763 1221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -118.66 70.7449484536 -168% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 80.5 7.45979381443 1079% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.0 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.7 7.59969072165 220% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 83.6 8.54432989691 978% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.