More and more people are leaving the country side and moving to cities . Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages .
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes on the account of modernity . At present , the trend of migrating to mega cities are gaining problems among countryside masses . Here , I would like to describe that advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages .
There are many fold merits of this phenomenon. First and foremost , moving in cities by people who lives in rural area is beneficial to get supreme education . To elaborate , authorities of megacities provide plenty of facilities to the school students such as transport , books ,equipments for playing and so on and therefore juveniles migrate in cities . they get supreme study classes from professional trainers and they can broden up their origin of knowledge . they can make their body physically fit while taking part in sports activities . Thus , getting supreme education plays a vital role to get flying colours in studies and they can make their body fit as fiddle .
Further emphasising , individuals can fulfill their fundamental needs while living in big cities. To justify, the rate of unemployment is on the peak level in this era of inflation and masses find trouble to earn bread and butter and therefore they migrate to cities . Well educate youngsters can get optimum job opportunities . Hence , they can live luxurious lifestyle in megacities . On the contrary , it has darker to .
To embark with , the environmental problems can put detrimental effect on cities while migrating from rural area to cities . To demonstrate , population is likely to increase as well as the level of pollution would be on the elevation majority of masses use transportation modes which released the gases and produce noise pollution . Authorities promote deforestation for constructing new accommodation and school's their for masses can suffer from health ailments .
To recalculate , I still believe that government should establish school colleges and other facilities in rural areas so that muscles can not move to cities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28155339806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87931696172 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 309.0 20.2975951904 1522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1632.0 106.682146367 1530% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 309.0 20.7667163134 1488% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127207968843 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127207968843 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851986468933 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703597138048 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 157.9 13.0946893788 1206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -250.62 50.2224549098 -499% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 125.0 11.3001002004 1106% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.51 8.58950901804 274% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 9.78957915832 654% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 125.6 10.1190380762 1241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 158.0 10.7795591182 1466% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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