Chilhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?
Childhood obesity is becoming a serious public health challenge in many nations. This essay will discuss some possible reasons for this phenomenon and propose some practical measures to mitigate it.
There are several reasons for obesity of the children related to overeating unhealthy food and moving too little. The first reason is children nowadays are consuming a host of fast food and processed food which contain too many calories, sugar, and fat. This is because there could be unlimited high-calorie food options in their neighborhood, convenient for busy parents who could not cook healthy meals for their kids regularly. Another reason can be leading a sedentary lifestyle. Children could not often take exercise or active sports because they are too busy studying or their residence do not equip enough facilities for them to play and do sports. Consequently, children would burn fewer calories as energy compared to the amount they load, and their body will store extra calories as fat, leading to obesity.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, it is important for parents to control what their children eat to ensure they have a healthy diet. Parents could also educate their kids about the detrimental effects of an imbalanced diet to make healthier food choices. Another possible way to overcome this problem would be banning junk food from the school menus and restrict fast-food advertising on many means of media such as television or social media. Lastly, parents should limit the time of doing sedentary activities and encourage their children to do regular exercise to burn calories and control their weight.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to an increase in the number of obese children these days, and many solutions can be implemented to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14381270903 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47185022034 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 299.0 20.2975951904 1473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1538.0 106.682146367 1442% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 299.0 20.7667163134 1440% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 74.0 7.06120827912 1048% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181062637404 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181062637404 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13466199798 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515863254599 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.3 13.0946893788 1163% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -232.01 50.2224549098 -462% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.9 11.3001002004 1061% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.53 8.58950901804 262% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.6 10.1190380762 1202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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