Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.
The land that once used to grow vegetation is now turning into desert because of the climate change and needs to be protected. according to the passage, scientists have suggested the using of box-shape device that collects water will help the trees to grow but it will not be successful against this desertification. The speaker however, stated that the reasons mentioned against the plant box device are not convincing.
First, according to the passage the cost of device cannot afford to buy millions of trees. The speaker on the contrary explained that, the device is useful in a way that once a tree grown and get bigger it can be uprooted from the device and another tree can be planted. moreover, if we divide the cost of a device over the number of trees can be grown in it will become reasonable as, device can be reusable.
In addition, passage mentioned that in harsh condition people can not able to feed themselves so it is difficult to motivate these people to use the device. however, speaker stated that there are many possible rewards for people as device not only collect for a tree but also for other plants. this helps the people to grow other vegetables for them which means they could have more food. Further more, once the tree in the device outgrown its branches can be used for burning fire. Therefore, using the device for such people means they have more food and fire.
Finally, passage stated that the device ability is limited for small tree and may not be able to survive in harsh environment. The lecturer on the other hand stated that, a tree can survive in very harsh condition because once the tree grown bigger it has profound roots system that reaches deep into the moist soil. moreover, she claimed that in Sahara desert 90% of the trees have been thriving after the devices were removed. As a result, the trees will survive on the basis of deep underground root system .
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing computer games is a waste of time Children should not be allowed to play them Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Some people think that scientists make the most important contributions to society Other people think that the contributions of artists are the most important Which position do you agree with Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave Do you agree or disagree Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: According
...imate change and needs to be protected. according to the passage, scientists have suggest...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the passage the cost of device cannot afford to buy millions of trees. The spe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... speaker on the contrary explained that, the device is useful in a way that once ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be uprooted from the device and another tree can be planted. moreover, if we div...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...evice and another tree can be planted. moreover, if we divide the cost of a device over...
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Suggestion:
... number of trees can be grown in it will become reasonable as, device can be reus...
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Suggestion: However
...otivate these people to use the device. however, speaker stated that there are many pos...
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Suggestion: This
...t for a tree but also for other plants. this helps the people to grow other vegetabl...
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Suggestion:
...people to grow other vegetables for them which means they could have more food. F...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... that reaches deep into the moist soil. moreover, she claimed that in Sahara desert 90% ...
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Suggestion: .
...he basis of deep underground root system .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 336.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71130952381 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34556922831 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7909409139 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0651472499697 0.272083759551 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274692211894 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205516393499 0.0662205650399 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438297345664 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164957327052 0.0443174109184 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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