Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
Today, workers are tending to accept overtime working at the workplace. This essay will clarify the reasons for this trend and the problems associated.
Many workforces have increasing movement in spending over standard working hours for some reasons. To start off, the undeniable fact is that nowadays the mainstream media have played a crucial role in making humans have to work more and more to satisfy their desires. To explain this, plenty of advertisements on multimedia seem to enhance the standard in general, for example, Apple usually launches new generation for iPhone line every year and along with manipulating customers’ behaviour and thinking, which create a sense of scarcity and then they seem to force themselves to spend more time on making more salary as a survival response. Furthermore, the old mindset about which parents are likely to do work as much as possible to accumulate for their descendants in order that the next generation will have a brighter future still exists until now. Besides, if everyone does not work extra hours, they can have to face difficulties relating to finance, because of the fact that the world is undergoing fast-paced growth leading to the surge in the cost of living.
An increase in the time of working perhaps make employees take some adverse effect. Firstly, should humans work overtime for a long time, materialism would be able to embed in their mindset. This is because ,in a money-based society, money seems to be prioritized the most by almost all people, aside from many factors such as the pressure of finance, misfortune, which as a result, make it possible to become an intangible barrier with everyone around and only concern about earning money. Moreover, their health is one of the serious issues about not only physical illness but also psychology. To clarify this, as they nearly have to tackle a lot of things from personal to family or even social troubles repeating every day in their daily life, of course, they will have to suffer real harm to themselves to a certain period.
In conclusion, the modern media and outdated traditions are one of the elements to distribute an increasing trend in working overtime these days. Therefore, what they have was more wealth, but lost was the health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, even so, for example, in conclusion, in general, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03174603175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62769136406 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0864413396 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141539848074 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526660714247 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490450006353 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10107758775 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532742177797 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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