Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that the most serious problems in the world has been solved in our life time. I feel this way for the following reasons. First, people are more healthy and live more long live than before. Another reason is, work load on human have been reduced which had improve their work quality.
To begin with,the issue of human health has been resolved and they are more healthy. In the past, many diseases which were non curabale are curable during my lifetime. For instance, development in the field of sciences has found the cure of many deadly viruses nd bacteria which causes sudden deaths or spreadable. these diseases like pneumonia, polio, malairia cancer. In the past, it was very difficult to combat those diseases but to advancament made by science it now has resolved these health issues and people can live more. Therefore, people health has been improved.
In addition, invention of machines has decreased the work load of human. Most of the work in offices, hospitals are automated so human can spent more time in improving the life. To be more specific, many machines at pharmaceuticals are progamed and robots are there to operated these huge machines which allows more humans available for the important research work . Also in the hospitals minor surgerires can be done by robots which has decreased work load of doctor and they are more available for the critical patients or life threatening emergencies in hospitals.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that, the most serious problems in the world has been solved during my lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ems in the world has been solved in our life time. I feel this way for the following reas...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ad on human have been reduced which had improve their work quality. To begin with,the ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ad on human have been reduced which had improve their work quality. To begin with,the ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...prove their work quality. To begin with,the issue of human health has been resolved...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ich causes sudden deaths or spreadable. these diseases like pneumonia, polio, malairi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...vailable for the important research work . Also in the hospitals minor surgerires ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98867924528 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51648418112 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2762421441 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146540455653 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628749289003 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119412812647 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153271325924 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148809756225 0.0645574589148 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.