The line graph illustrates the number of visitors came to a particular island of Caribbean from 2010 to 2017
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors came to a particular island of Caribbean from 2010 to 2017. Overall, it is obvious that there was a gradual growth in the number of tourists, who stayed on cruise ships, except the year of 2012 while the number of tourists landed on island had both increases and decreases during the years peaking up the total number of comers visited to the island.
According to the graph, the statistics showed a half million tourists stayed on boat in 2011 meanwhile the data about the number of people landed on island demonstrated a constant amount.In the following year the number of people stayed on ships had a slight drop of 0.25 million while the latter had an increase of about 1.300000 increasing the total number to 1.500000.
In accordance with the information given in the graph, the number of visitors stayed on the cruise ships grew gradually in the five consecutive years in a row reaching at 2 million at the end.Additionally, 1.5 00000 people stayed on island in 2013 and there were no changes till 2015. After a slight drop in the following year, it increased again to 1.5 00000. The both locations in which people stayed influenced the total number of visitors on Caribbean island reaching 3.5 00000 in the year of 2017.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...n island demonstrated a constant amount.In the following year the number of people...
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Suggestion: Additionally
... a row reaching at 2 million at the end.Additionally, 1.5 00000 people stayed on island in 2...
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Suggestion:
...s on Caribbean island reaching 3.5 00000 in the year of 2017.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61309408425 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481981981982 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.648388033 43.030603864 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.0 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354595356466 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262303775697 0.103423049105 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.33668933304 0.0843802449381 399% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262533815543 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177726479502 0.0819641961636 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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