Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
According to sociologists, the standards of life has improved significantly over the last 50 years. However, they also claim that the number of people experiencing stress has increased dramatically as well. In this essay, I will consider a list of main reasons for this growth and suggest possible solutions to it.
Let us start with the causes of stress in contemporary society. The first reason is concerned with stressful jobs. For example, in Kazakhstan many employees suffer from stress-related disorders, because they have to either work overtime for weeks or do without holidays for years. Another factor is associated with modern gadgets. Stress usually prevails in life, since people are heavily exposed to state-of-art technologies instead of relaxing in the countryside away from devices, such as smartphones and computers. As a result, after the analysis of the sources of stress, it has become clear that these days there are many things that intensify stress in daily routines.
Nevertheless, some sociologists believe that it is probable to minimize the level of stress, if sufferers adopt the following measures. Firstly, companies should strictly follow the established working hours. The way forward would be for managers both to encourage employees to go home on time and send them on vacation regularly. For instance, in Kazakhstan the majority of organizations have already applied this practice, and now their subordinates are leading a balanced life. Secondly, stress-stricken people ought to take nature-related therapy often. They should turn off their smartphones and spend time in the mountain or beaches at the weekend. It will allow them to have a rest and recharge batteries for the upcoming week. Therefore, after the consideration of the solutions, it is now obvious that it is feasible to address stress in modern world.
In conclusion, although there are plenty of sources of stress in current world, I think that it can be limited to a great extend, if people adhere to the above mentioned actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30555555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98847523412 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9031805858 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250323635108 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718969039268 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556213894194 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135614121573 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450684534872 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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