A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He has asked you for advice about living in your city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
suggest an interesting part of the city to live in
describe the public transport in your city
say how your friend can meet new people there
Hi John,
I would be happy to assist you with your relocation to my hometown and glad that you're looking to me for help.
As you asked me, I have gathered all information about life in Karaganda. To begin with, there are many places of interest to go sightseeing. For example, you can go to the local library if you're fond of reading. You can also pay a visit to the central museum and learn more about my country along with the culture. In addition to that, if you're into nightlife at weekends, there are many clubs, where you can enjoy yourself with friends and colleagues. However, they're closed because of the quarantine. Talking about public transport, all modes of public transport is available in my city such as buses, taxi and trains. A year ago the bus terminals updated the bus fleet so they are comfortable, cheap and fast. Speaking about new friends, you can make friends with people from the library. On top of that, you can introduce my friends, but they're usually busy at the weekday.
If you need any further information, I'm always ready to help you. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Tolegen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for example, in addition, speaking about, such as, talking about, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.695 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46352897284 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7211221718 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0714285714 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261830469277 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784448204626 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696747621006 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179118968031 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486851611848 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.