Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
These days there is a controversial debate about technological advancements being used for surveillance of personal data. Even more problematic part of it, many people are not aware that their data has been used for monitoring reasons. Although there are some advantages of data collection, the disadvantages of this development might drastically affect the society we live in.
First of all, technological developments are highly dependent on data that has been collected. Most of the applications are created through the responses gathered from the users. These accumulations of data improve the responsiveness of the technology, for instance, the navigation apps are taking pictures from satellites and streets to draw virtual maps, hence, we find our way without getting lost all around the world. Furthermore, the CCTV cameras played a significant role to reduce the crime rates in the installed areas, which fortifies public security.
Meanwhile, security cameras are installed almost everywhere in the cities and recording the behavior of the people who are living in that city. Over time, this information is being used to predict the similar patterns in peoples behavior and therefore people’s life becomes susceptible to other bodies that are controlling, advertising, marketing. Researches reveal that shopping centers analyze the behavior patterns of their customers to increase their sales. In addition, Monitoring of personal data has resulted in a lack of privacy as we know from the Jenifer Lawrence case. Her pictures with her boyfriend in the Cloud were exhibited on social media without her permission to blackmail her.
In conclusion, the benefits of technology enhance, however, privacy in using these advancements is essential in order to protect our freedoms and rights to choose. To implement this, raising awareness and action necessarily should be taken by experts.
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The internet has changed the way we communicate Much communication today happens through social media Some people support this and think it is a positive development Others believe that social media have negative effects 84
- Average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine
- consumption of junk food 61
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras In many cases the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54827586207 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02995155422 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0804302368 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235380516756 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712152289927 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608077398535 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128866931902 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614209999642 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.