In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.
In recent years, the phenomenon of significantly increasing means of transport has drawn great attention of many people. This problem has led to various detrimental impacts on the citizen’s life and the environment. In this essay, I will attempt to shed light on the reasons contributing to this issue and suggest a number of remedial measures that the government can adopt to reduce the level of traffic.
The situation of the overwhelming number of transport can be well illustrated with the congestion happening continuously which poses a threat to human’s life and takes a great toll on the environment. It is due to the fact that the volume of private vehicles attending the traffic is escalating. Motorbikes in Vietnam, for example, have been dominating other kinds of transport with half of the population owning a least a motorcycle. Another reason leading to this problem would be the poor quality of the traffic system. There are not enough modern public vehicles like buses for citizens and downgraded and narrow size of road can be a straightforward factor contributing to the increase of accidents and mortality.
To deal with this situation, it should be the government’s responsibility to carry out some solutions. Firstly, it would be effective if the authorities adopt some measures affecting people's own budget to prevent the increasing number of vehicles. By imposing a higher tax on private transport, people will hesitate and take more consideration before buying which might reduce the number of such vehicles like motorcycles or cars. They can also focus on developing the traffic law to raise people’s awareness in traffic, for example, punish them with a big amount of money when they violate the traffic regulations. The second solution would be improving the quality of traffic facilities such as roads, public transports, stations’ construction and so on in order to reduce the negative impact of overwhelming volume of vehicles.
In conclusion, the problem of rising traffic level can be attributed to several factors, and the government’s involvement in dealing with the situation is indispensable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31176470588 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13976064148 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5421447261 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103204892459 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040337513822 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454485253556 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688109276802 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168959156622 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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