Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People are increasingly traveling to other countries for spending their holidays, getting treatment for their ailments and for many more reasons. It is believed by some that travelers ought to follow traditions of host countries while others say host countries should accept visitors as they are. This essay intends to analyze both perspectives. I agree with the latter view.
There are many reasons why people visiting other countries should imitate the customs of the local country. Firstly, when they learn the culture of other nations, it reduces the chances of misunderstanding and embarrassment. They would not hurt the feelings of native people unknowingly. For instance, it is considered offensive to ask about salary in the UK, whereas it is very common in India. secondly, the culture and traditions of the country provide a deep insight into that country. If they copy the customs of the local country, they would learn about them. hence, they would be able to make a better rapport with the people of that country.
On other hand, people who assert that host country should welcome other cultures, give their reasons as follows. To begin with, the first reason why they should accept the culture of travelers is that It would helps to boost the economy as foreign visitors would feel respected, and it may strengthen the relationship between the people of both the country and as a result, overseas visitors are more likely to visit that country again. Also, there should not be a compulsion to follow the customs and traditions of the hosting nation. For instance, if a person, who is vegetarian, visits a country, where people eat meat, he should not be forced to eat meat. It would have counterproductive results on the tourism of that country.
I believe the host nation should accept the traditions of visitors as we are imparted with knowledge about the living style, and culture of their culture without going anywhere and without spending a single penny.
In conclusion, I believe that visitors should not be forced to imitate the tradition of the host country and these local nations should respect the culture of overseas visitors and embrace the cultural difference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08287292818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65380918948 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461325966851 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.431817017 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404789303655 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130232849542 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117348995629 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245054880491 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07417926787 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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