Some people think that parents should limit the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In past few years, due to technical advancement, kids are spending more time in front of screen. While few people couldn't care less about it, others argue that limiting the time children should spend on screen should be limited and can be utilized for reading purposes. I completely agree with the latter view as it is beneficial for kids in long run.
One of the benefit is healthy eyesight. firstly, reduced time in watching screen put less strain in eyes as a result, it avoid the problem of weak cornea. for example, nowadays majority of kids are having spectacles in juvenile age or may be earlier, because their significant time goes on watching serial or tv games. secondly, addiction is one of the outcome by playing game for longer hours. Hence, by limiting the time child should spend on screen is good approach.
In addition to that, reading books help them to gain knowledge that can be related to anything that a kid like. for an instance, if a kids read some story book, at least they we learn some morals form it and there vocabulary will also improve over the time. moreover, reading inbuild the concentration power, which is an essential quality that help in future, so investing the time in reading comes with its own advantages.
To conclude, I totally support the idea that instead of wasting the time in some stupid's games or series, kids should devote little amount of time in reading. As a outcome, it will widen the horizon of the knowledge for them and keep their vision strong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73863636364 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42532823695 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9401352533 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220467376135 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716619084085 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442529387387 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129141774292 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111880342779 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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