Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are splits opinions regarding the noice controllation. Some believes that the publice should be free to produce any noice as much as they want while I thinks that proprtion of unnecesurry noice needs to be taken care any how. Both has it's own pros and cons. Before commenting on my decision, both the opinions would be dicussed in the ensuing paragraphs with partinent examples.
On the one hand, Due to the unbareable noice produced by vehicles or any other things may leads to someones's mental health related issues. If the frequancy of sound is too much than there are posibility of distraction in mental peace and indirectly which cause issues related to health problems like deafness and many more. For instance, article aired by THE TIMES OF INDIA showed that. People are from urban cities of India complained almost five times more than previous year related to noice which produce by the industrial sectors near by theirs homes.
On the other hand, People nowadays are opting more towards celebration. Either it is function or festivels, they celebrate these cheerfull moments to remember as part of their mesmerisied memory. As a part of celebration they arranged big attaire function with loud music system which mostly consist of huge sounds bar and produce louder music for the joy of crowd. To exempilfy, Surveyed done by GOURVERNMENT OF GUJARAT CLUB shows that In Gujarat there is 85% dramatical increase in the year of 2019 compared to 2018.
In conclusion, It could be recapitulate that the there should be sanction of such law for certain area of city to regulate noice however, activities related to recreation should be introduce which premise of less louder music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... any noice as much as they want while I thinks that proprtion of unnecesurry noice nee...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...which produce by the industrial sectors near by theirs homes. On the other hand, Peo...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sanctioned'?
Suggestion: sanctioned
...e recapitulate that the there should be sanction of such law for certain area of city to...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'introduced'?
Suggestion: introduced
...ivities related to recreation should be introduce which premise of less louder music.
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less loud'?
Suggestion: less loud
...on should be introduce which premise of less louder music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02836879433 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60791434725 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6497925269 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175731991228 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533731934891 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561668080369 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103859923679 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721420888931 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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