In order to be successful in sport some people think you have to be physically strong Others say that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While it is maintained by some that to succeed in sport physical strength is needed, other people believe that particularly mental strength lead for successful career. Personally, I consider the perfect receipt of prosperous path in sport is a combination of physical and mental skills.
On the one hand, it is unlikely that without extraordinary physical shape person even have a possibility to become a middle class sportsman. The basic step of performing in sport is a ability to be physically stronger than opponents. Indeed, for some kind of sport this condition is more sufficient than for others. For example, athletics, swimming, fights are require to be faster, resistant and stronger. Consequently, it is impossible to become a successful sportsman if do not develop physical skills.
On the other hand, all types of sports are require to be mentally resistant. This resistance help to recover after losses that especially crucial for all sportsmen as it is highly unlikely not to lose at all. Furthermore, mental strong helps to be patient in everyday workouts and save optimism before important competitions. For instance, there are interviews with champions in which they tell that in many cases exactly inner tough spirit and right mindset help them to win.
Though people may vary in their opinions, I believe that both physical strength and mental mindset are the vital parts of success in sport. The most important thing is that altogether these skills create synergy effect which multiple results of performing sportsman. For example, even spending most of the time in training football players need a strategy and mental support from their coach during the match. There are many examples of winning from the worst situations after supporting trainer’s speech.
While it is sometimes believed that the secret of success in sport is physical strength, there are those who consider mental mindset is more sufficient. To my mind these two qualities are equally contribute for developing successful sport career.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in many cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28086419753 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79038804328 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0124923042 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.647058824 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26060179358 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848510192489 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522016453824 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147383848057 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274562417276 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in many cases, on the other hand

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