natural talent or training
Natural talent and training are the main topic to be discussed. Some people are generally belived to be born with certain talents, for sport or music. However, it is sometimes claimed thay any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
The first, we will discuss to natural talent. Talent is natural thing, children cann’t train to become a professional man or woman. In another words, there are more skills than a learned techniques. Children cann’t be taught or improved because they already have the talent. Besides that, child can be taught to become a good musicians or sports person. Children need a long times to practice their skills if they want to professional sports or musicians. It claims their patience and indulgement.
And in my opinion, I think natural talent or training are also good for children. Because they have a favorite or talent to be confident in public. They can lifted stresses from study and fall in line with their friends. I personally think that talents are inherited by a gene. And talents allow us have specially skills, while the other students have to work hard to reach a comparable level.
Conclusion, natural talent or training also play an important in our life. Without the natural talent, training chilren will not motive to improve themselves. By contrast, without the traing, children will not find out and develop their talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98723404255 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56364526572 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565957446809 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9029359533 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1111111111 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0555555556 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43487387421 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167183086436 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192038870396 0.0667982634062 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301136560479 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845150472303 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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